Follow these guidelines to work on your elevator pitches.
1. Use the following links to learn how to create and deliver an elevator pitch:
Tips: https://www.thebalancemoney.com/elevator-speech-examples-and-writing-tips-2061976
Tips & example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lb0Yz_5ZYzI
2. Record and upload your own elevator pitch on Flipgrid using this link: https://flip.com/a9cdc100
3. Watch the videos recorded by your classmates and make constructive comments. Video record your comments and upload them on Flipgrid using the same link. You can follow these guidelines:
-Comment on your classmate´s communicative skills.
Is the message clear enough?
Is the content adequate? Why/why not?
Is fluency ok? Why/why not?
What is the speaker's attitude? And what about his/her body language?
-Comment on your classmate´s language skills.
Is the language limited or rather varied?
Identify and comment on at least 3-4 grammar / vocabulary / pronunciation inaccuracies.
-Make a general comment on a strong point and a suggestion for improvement.
What is the communication aspect you like the best?
What improvement suggestions would you make to enhance communication?
4. Watch the feedback provided by your classmates on your own videos. You can produce an enhanced version of your elevator pitch if you wish.
3 comentarios:
MARIETA:
Is the message clear enough? yes
Is the content adequate? Why/why not? Yes, because it follows a good structure.
Is fluency ok? Why/why not? It is good, his body language is not very noticeable because of the way it has been recorded.
What is the speaker's attitude? And what about his/her body language? is it varied.
-Comment on your classmate´s language skills.
Is the language limited or rather varied? Variated
Identify and comment on at least 3-4 grammar / vocabulary / pronunciation inaccuracies.
-Make a general comment on a strong point and a suggestion for improvement. the strength is that you have a good vocabulary but the body language is very unexpressive
What is the communication aspect you like the best? she uses professional vocabulary
What improvement suggestions would you make to enhance communication? she should improve body language.
Erika:
Comment on your partner's communication skills.
Is the message clear enough? Yes, the message is clear although you could add more differential and relevant information.
Is the content appropriate, why? Yes, it talks about her and what she studies.
Is the fluency adequate? Why? Is very fluent all the time.
What is the speaker's attitude and body language? She would improve her body language it would be much better.
-Comment on the language skills of your class.
Is the language limited or rather varied? The language is good enough.
Identify and comment on at least 3-4 grammatical / vocabulary / pronunciation inaccuracies.
-Make a general comment on a strength and a suggestion for improvement. It is important to change the tone of voice to not become monotonous and a strength is your confidence.
Which aspect of communication do you like the most? Her confidence with which you say it.
What suggestions for improvement would you make to improve communication? Improvement of body language.
MAR:
Is the message clear enough? yes
Is the content adequate? Why/why not? yes because he/she has structured the information well
Is fluency ok? Why/why not? yes because she is not often slurred and is understood
What is the speaker's attitude? And what about his/her body language? good, but the body language is not very good when she is seated.
-Comment on your classmate´s language skills.
Is the language limited or rather varied? more or less varied.
Identify and comment on at least 3-4 grammar / vocabulary / pronunciation inaccuracies. has none
-Make a general comment on a strong point and a suggestion for improvement. the strength is that there is no fluent speech but the body language is very sparse.
What is the communication aspect you like the best? professional language
What improvement suggestions would you make to enhance communication? she would improve the body language much more
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