Choose the appropriate descriptors. Looking back at my presentation:
I am happy with my performance
I had prepared my presentation thoroughly
The subject of my presentation was a good choice
My presentation was structured clearly
The support materials I used were appropriate
I was comfortable throughout the presentation
I paid attention to the audience
My classmates were interested in my presentation
My classmates asked interesting questions
My classmates’ feedback was useful
My teacher’s feedback was useful
The comments on my presentation were suitable
Everything went as I had expected
It was a positive learning experience
Make comments on each one of the following aspects concerning your oral presentation:
Linguistic use (grammar/vocabulary accuracy, range & adequacy)
Task achievement (efficient achievement of communicative purpose, content relevance & extent)
Fluency & pronunciation (speech flow, intonation, stress & rhythm)
Communicative resources (use of linguistic and non-linguistic resources, support materials, attitude)
General comments:
Did anything go wrong during your presentation? What could you have done to avoid it?
Which aspect of your presentation are you most proud of?
How did the beginning / development / end of your presentation go?
Would you like to repeat your presentation? Would you change anything?
If you could do your presentation again, do you think your performance would be better now? Why / why not?
Others
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First of all, the vocabulary was correct and appropiate. Both guys were good communicators, and we understand what they wanted to explain to us. I have to say, that they were looking at the public and this is an important point to take into account when you do a presentation to capture the attention of people.
Although the presentation was good, they put too many slides but with his attitude the presentation was lighter.
The fluency was okey in both but the pronunciation could be better. And sometimes the intonation and stress was in the incorrect point.
Finally they didn't use many resources that could have improved the presentation a lot.
In conclusion, the presentation was good and they have improved a lot from the beggining of the course but they can do it better.
Presentation Sao Paulo:
In my opinion is a good presentation, i believe that the Powerpoint is very clear and is easier the comprension.
I know that it's difficult to talk in the middle of the class, and maybe this is the reason for that the pronunciation or the fluency is not the best. I believe that this point is improvable when you practise more the presentations and talk in front of other people.
I liked it that they specify a lot all the details of the impacts of tourism, and the context that they talk.
in conclusion, for me and in my opinion is a good presentation, the feeling with the presentation is positive, and nothing more.
*Did anything go wrong during your presentation? What could you have done to avoid it?
In my opinion there are several things that I could improve, but the main one was my fluency, before watching my presentation I didn't realise how slowly I talk.
*Which aspect of your presentation are you most proud of?
The aspect that I am most proud of is that it seems that I really know what I am talking about, and it's very easy to understand me.
*How did the beginning / development / end of your presentation go?
In my opinion all the presentation was well estructured, and in general was a good presentation, there are more positive things than negative.
*Would you like to repeat your presentation? Would you change anything?
Absolutely, because I guess that this is the best way to improve,furthermore if we have the chance to watch us is a very usefull activity.
*If you could do your presentation again, do you think your performance would be better now? Why / why not?
I am 100% sure that it will be better, because the best way to improve is practicing every day, so the more practice, the better english we have.
My comment is about the third presentation.
I think the presentation was very good. Pronunciation was generally good, except for some words such as "tourism" or names of countries or, for example, Adria said "etcétera" instead "so on".
Another problem will be that Carlos needs to read at times.
The boys spoke fluently, they using a correct vocabulary, and they were not very nervous.
Intonation is low at times, but generally is good too.
The content of the presentation seems appropriate and full, and the PPT is perfect.
Good introduction of himself ( moha ) and his college, and good explanation of duration of the presentation.
Good self correction on Moha, when he made mistakes such as Russia ( wrong pronunciation ) he corrected himself.
The negative impacts of the tourism on Marbella was very well explained by Jose.
So few possible improvements for too many problems.
Moha has prepared more the text than jose, as Jose was reading from the powerpoint, still jose had a very good pronunciation.
I really like the answer from Moha about how to avoid the mass tourism, he waited to asnwer question and said an accurate answer
Respect to my presentation, I was very nervous and I don't prepared correctly my presentation. I think that is the big error and as a result of my bad qualification for my teacher.
Moreover, I don't understand some words about the context and explain some situations put key words.
Most students comments me that I need improve my performance. Also I consider that I need see all people and don't see the monitor.
In my opinion,I need improve in all aspects of the presentations, I will be more fluency, be a self-confidence, I will not nervous and prepare well the contents.
The grammar and vocabulary were very correct.
The communication was not the best because there were too many pauses and this could be a little boring for the audience.
The stress in some words were not correct and the intonation probably needs to be more energetic.
During the presentation I have made some mistakes as reading so much on certain slides and I did not do too much to solve it.
I will say that I am very proud of the resources we use because they were perfectly understadable and very good looking.
I started very slow speaking and I got a little bit faster at the middle and more at the end.
For sure I will repeat my presentation if I have the opportunity and this time I will try to be more focus, speak faster and prepare better all the contain of the presentation.
If I repeat the presentation, this will be better always that I prepare it a lot practising at my house.
As a last thing, I will say that my partner did it better and he was more fuently than me
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